Friday, June 25, 2010

EN MEL VIZUNDHA MAZAI THULIAE……. (cont)

Back to happy home mansion – 11 30 pm

Meera madras vandha sandhosham oru pakkam, Chennai ipl jeyicha sandhosham maru pakkam, dae guru idha celebrate panrom….

Engaluku therija orae celebration…yaarume elladha iravu nerathuthula thiruvanmiyur beach ku poi kadal sathathula eayirkaya rasikradhu dhanunga
(Beach enga mansion la irundhu 10 min walk dhan)

Getha north kara Mumbai Indians fans rooma cross panni…. Meduva beachu ku nadaka aarambichom…. Nadakka nadakkave oru sms….Meera…..
Hi nandha…. Naalaiku enaku adyar la oru work iruku 3 maniku mudijidum, if u r free meet panlama evening?
Ya sure meera … kandipa….
Enaku madras la edhuvum theriyadhu, enna adyar depot la pick up panniko 4 pm ku……
Ya sure meera…. Waiting to c u nu reply pannaen…
Me too…. Sema tired da… c u tomo… tc.. gudnite nandha…….nu ava thoongita……
Gudnite meera nu anupuvvum nanga beach ah reach panavum saria irundhuchu……

Romba romba sandhoshma irundhaen annaiku…..
Enakagavae ellam nadapadhu pola oru unarvu…..
Nite neram, azagana iruttu, csk victory, vtv movie, meera sms, kadal satham, attractive nila velicham, earphone la kannadhasan paatu, ellathukum mela uyir nanban guru kuda…. Mazai thooral mattum missing…..irrundahlum….
22 vayasula vaazkai romba sandhoshma dhanga iruku


Kaathiruppaadhilum sugam dhane

Beach la irundhu varrapo mani 1 30 irukum… marunaal meera va paaka porangra sandhoshutula saria thoongavae ella
Kannu mulikrappo mani 7 am…..
Avasara avsarama ennoda favorite black shirt ( kadicia college la meera va paakrapo pottadhu)
Eduthu iron pannitu… heater ah pottutu… guru vayum ezupinaen…..
Paal vanga kadaiku poitu varradhu kula guru kulichitan… naanum udane kulichitu veliyila vandhen…. Eeenu asatu siripoda pose kuduthan guru…
Aasai aasai ya iron panni vacha en favorite black shirt potukitu….
Kadupula vaikullayae thittikitu maroon shirt ah eduthu maatinaen….. apuram avasara avasarama office bus ah pudichu office poi serdhom….
Innaiku endha velayum panna poradhila nu mudivu pannitaeneppavum pola…… mail ella check panni mudika mani 11 20 aachu….
Padapadapave irundhuchu… time odavae ella….
Madhiyam 2 mani meera kita irundhu sms..
Nandha plan ok dhane?
Ok meera… sure…..……
Apadi ipadinu 3 mani aachu….
Kelambiyachu oofice la irundhu……



EN MEL VIZUNDHA MAZAI THULIYAE…….

Sariya 3 45 ku adyar depot la aajar naan….
Eppovum pola oru sorry yoda late ah vandhu serndha meera….. mansukula avvlo sandhosham…..
Epadi irukae meera?….
Nimmadhia irundhaen veetla saptu thoongitu poi nandhava thondaravu pannu nu anupi vachitnaga srirangathula irundhu nu kurumba sonna……
Oru varushathula enna pannayo ellayo nalla pesa kathukita ma…..
oru auto la porapattom thiruvanmiyur beach ku…..
adyar thiruvanmiyur cross panni medhuva beach ku poi serthom…..
mani 5 irukum….
Beach la utkardhom…..
Unna ivvlo seekiram paarpaenu ninaika vae illa meera……adhuvum Chennai la…..
Naanum da… but enaku theriym unna na kandipa parpaenu nu sonna kan simittikitae…..
Apadiyae pesikitae kadarkari ooram nadaka aarambichom……
(EN MIND VOICE – MACHI GURU EVVLO NAAL NITE INDHA BEACH LA UTKARDHU POLAMBIRUKOM… NAMMA ELLAM EPPO ORU PONNU KUDA KAI KORTHU BEACH LA NADAKRADHU NU….. )

nadakrapo meera than hair ah sari panna hair clip ah kazatitu thirupi maata pona….. aduthu vinadi andha clip en pocket la…. Appadiyae vidu meera …. Adhudhan unaku cute ah iruku…..
Oru melliya punnagai aval uthattoram…..
Apadiyae utkardhom…
eppavum pola ava pesuna na rasichi kitu irundhan… adhe karu karu vizigal, curly free hair, pesa pesa dance aadum andha peria ear rings…
ennamo ponga, adhukellam kuduthu vachirukanum

nandha, eppavum pola un favorite nu andha black shirt ah pottutu vandiduvio nu nenachen, nalla vela maathitae… indha maroon colour shirt unaku edupa iruku …….appadinu meera sollave…
( EN MIND VOICE – THANKS DA GURU ANDHA BLACK SHIRT AH MAATNADHUKU NEEDHAN DA NANBAN)

Nandha oru nalla boyname sollu….
Ella pasangalum solra madhiri arivali nu nenachi NANDA appadinu udanae en paera sonnaen……
Yedhuku meera…. Solu nu aarvama kaettaen….
Illada veetla pudusa oru punae kutti vangirukom, adhuku vaika dhan da nu peria bulb ah kudutha…..
Asadu valingaen…….

Ella pasanga ponnunga panra madhiri…
Kai regai pakradhu…
Kutti kutti sandai….
Mannula veedu…..
Beach sundal…..
Mobile la photos…..
Orae ear phone la paatu….


Kalam kalama beach ku pona namma seiya vendiya mukkiya kadamai allava..
22 vayasula vaazkai romba sandhoshma dhanga iruku...

Beach mannula ava vilayadikitu irrundhalae…. Indha ring ah un pocket la vachiko da porappo vangikraenu kudutha……
Veetla irundha oru varusham mapla adhu idhunu kalyana pechu edukalaya meera….
Adha yaen kaekra… na madras vandha mukkiyamana reason ae adhan…..
Yaen unaku ishtam illaya meera?…..
Appadi ellam illa…..aana ippo pannika ishtam illa….. medhuva pannuvomae …. Unaku 20 vayusula kalyanam na othukuviya… adhe pola dhan
Ne eppo nandha panna porae? Ponnu eppadi irukanumnu sollu?? edir kelvi ya thaakuna…
Namaku luv ellam sari varadhu meera…. Neraya paer kita pesuvvaen… oor suthuvaen….ellame short term dhan…. Kalyanam ellam veetla pakra ponnu dhan nu nalla payyan pola bit bitta potu thaakunaen.... Romba thelivu dhan pasanga…. Kindalaga sonna ava...

Romba naal aasai…. Appadi ennana vachirupanga ponnunga hand bag la … urimai oda eduthu kondaen avoloda handbag ah…..
Appa amma photo…. Id card…..
3 sami padam…avaloda passport size photo,
Comb…Kutti mirror….Neraya bills…ear rings…
Odanja valaiyal…Lipstick…Eyebrow pencil…
Vibudhi , kungumam…..

Kungumam…. Hoi ennadhu nu na kaettadhu dhan thaamadham….
Madras la na pona first kovil la kudutha kungumam nandha…adyar la… adhan late….
Neeyum vachiko nu sollikitae aarvama beach mannula avoloda paera azudhi design potukitu irundha…..
Naanum nalla pullaya vachitu…ne vachikala nu kaettaen…..
Enna da permanent ah kungumum vachi vidalamnu plan panria…nu chellama solikitae kan simitna….
(Mudan mudhala da pottu kupidra, nalla dhan irukunga...)
Yeen de vaika kudadha…..na yedhachaya dhan kaettaen… appuram un ishtam… nu oru build up…
Appadi ellam illa da…. Aanalum… nu izuthaa….
Rite vidu nu kungumatha ulla vaika ponaen…..
Sari vachi vidu nu avaladhu nethiya neetina….
Naanum takkunu vachitaen udane……..

Adutha 30 seconds mounam……
Idhu varai unardhiradha oru unarvu…..
Mei marandhu aval kangalaye parkiraen….
Avalum dhan…..
En vaazkayin miga sirappanu andha 30 nodigal…..
Na indha ulagathulaye illa ponga….
Thirumbi indha ulaguthil enna kondu vandhu vitadhu andha varudathin mudhal mazai thuli…..
Aandavane engala vaazthunadhu pola…..
22 vayasula………adhae diolog dhanga….

Meera kelamblaam…
Mazai perusa pieyaradhukulla poidalaam……
En kita kudai irruku nandha nu than blue colour kudiya viricha….. chinna kudai dhan…….
Iruvarum adjust panikitae nadaka aarambichom…..
Innum adhigamaga mazai…adigamaga vaaztha aarambichataru pola..... ulla va nandha nanaiyadhae nu akkariyudan order potta meera….

Aval thol mel en right hand ah potta comfortable ah nadakalamnu thonichu…. Apadie kaetten…..
Adhyaevae dhan avalum yosichirukanum…. Ok da nu takkunu sollita yosika vae illa ava…..
Adutha vinadi en kai aval tholgalil…….
Oorapunnagai aval udhattil…. Thirututnama rasichaen...
Konja dhooram nadandirupom…. Melum mazai adhigamachu….. oru marathuku keezae apadie ninnom…
Mounam….mounam …..
Adha vida sirandha diolog ulagathila illave illanga...
Andha mazai, maram, meera….., eyarkaiya na adhuku munnadi avvlo azaga unardha dhae illa……

Thiruppiyum medhuva nadaka aarambichom….
Konja dhooram poiruppom…..
Oru share auto en pakkathila vandhu ninnuchu…..
Orutharuku mattumae idam irundhuchu….
Fortunate ah rendu perumae andha oru idathil……
Thirrupiyum aval tholiyil enadhu right hand….
Adutha stop la ellarum erangitnaga….
Ippo avalum naanum mattumae auto la….
Aanalum ava thalli utkarala….
Naanum kai edukala……
Ennaval en karangaluku ullae……
Aval kangalum adhayae vae unmay enbadhu pola thirutu thanama enna oora kannula parthichu……

Thiruvanmiyur depot la erangunom….
47D avaluku ready ya irundhuchu….
Yeriko meera … mazai jasthi aagradhukula ne kelambu ma nu avala andha bus la yethi vitutaen…..
Jannal oorathil utkardha……
Vacha kan edukama ennayave parthu kitu irundha…..
KANGAL IRANDUM PESIKONDAL … BAASHAI OOMAI AAYIVIDUMO…….

Yaenda enna anupuranu kaekra madhiriyae irundhuchu…..
Andha mazailum na vaitha kungumam aziyala…..
En idhayatha pirichi siraikul vachadhu pol irundhuchu avala bus kambikulla parthapo……
(EN MIND VOICE – POGADHE MEERA…. ENNA VITTUTU POGADHE MEERA…..)


Bus medhuva nagara aarambichadhu……
Aval kangalil melliya kaneer…
Avvlo ganama irundhadhae illa en manasu……
Naanum manase illama oru auto la yerinaen…..
Auto radio la radio mirchi fm….
En mel vizundha mazai thuliyae ithanai naalai engirundhai….
Enakaga vae potta madhiri irunduchu….
Udane en ring tone maathitaen…. En mel vizundha….
Solli vaithadha pola udane meera calling….

EN MEL VIZUNDHA MAZAI THULIAYAE ITHANAI NAALAI ENGIRUNDHAI…….
Meera…..
Nandha…..
Mounam…..
Melum mounam…..
Purindhu vittadhu iruvarukum….
Dae NANDA andha ring iruka vendiya idam un pocket illa da … un viralla……
Meendum mounam…………

UDAMBIL URAIGINRA OOR UYIR POL, UNAKKUL DHANE NAAN IRUNDHAEN…….

BY,
MANESH.L
MANESHH18@GMAIL.COM....

30 comments:

  1. pala pasangaloda peelings apdiye sithiram ah pathivu senju irukeenga Manesh vaazhthukkal.. melum neraya story think panni.. pala peroda peelings veliya konduvara vainga :) nice flow.. keep gng :)

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  2. manesh unakula ipdi oru talent konuta da Meera ok. Nandha ne thana. dey poi soladha. simply superb man. reaaaaaaaaallllllllllly tooooooooooooooooooo gooooood ra keep it up

    A.Krish

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  3. Manesh, unakulla ipdi oru kathasiriyara!
    Namba mudila. Waiting for Part 3 :-)

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  4. Really nice buddy.. They way u narrated d story is very natural... Keep going man

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  5. Thalaivaaa pinniteenga...

    cha itha padicha piruga remba yeakamum, poraamai-yuma irruku na..

    Great story na.. keep writing..

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  6. Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuper Thangam.......
    No words to say abt ur story pulla.....
    Awesum :)
    Eagerly Waitin for Nxt Part....
    Seekirama ezhudha start pannu :-P

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  7. Its really awesome and mind blowing da.... You've enjoyed each and every line in this stories. I can see that. By the way Nanda, who is that Meera?

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  8. meera :-)???? kandipa future posts la solraen:-)
    thanks for all ur support:-)
    will try and improve down de lane:-).....

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  9. vazhthukkal manesh !! u have a gr8 story telling talent.. u hv a gr8 way ahead to bring out more sensitive issues of today... which is another area of scope for u to work.. ;)
    well keep going wid ur story also.. !! :)

    3 yrs in our college life..v ne'er knew abt ur talent.. !! gr8 goin..

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  10. hey manesh...awesome narration da..loved the story....keep it up.my best wishes da :-)

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  11. ellarum pathukunga adutha goutham menon ready! ready!ready!

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  12. Nanda meera beach pora po nan pathen..but avanga ena pakkala :)

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  13. its 2 gud-- seems u ve lived evry moment of it.. and these things happen 2 evry 1 ina slightly diffrnt waY

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  14. Nalla rasichi eludhiruka... Very nice da...

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  15. Jessi!!! intha padamae unnala dhaan... :)

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  16. so happy and grateful for all ur comments.....
    aana pala comments enakae romba romba overa irukunga:-)vaazthuringla illa ootringla na theriyalae:-).....

    watever it is... 25 vayasulu:-)......

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  17. ennoda story a copy adichalum... konjam naduvula bit konjam over than machi..

    @all : makkale, kadaisila meera va Guru correct pannuvan.. ithan climax...

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  18. machi.. nee en vayitherichala innum adhigama thaan kottikkara.. vaaippe illa.. romba poramaya irukku - un kadha solra therama & unakku nadanda intha santhosamaana nigalvugal - rendayum paathu..

    @Gane: machi.. Manesh namma category-e kedayaathu.. koodiya seekkirame Meera-voda foto-va ethirpaakkalaam.. ther wer a few indications that all these wer tru.. let's wait..

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  19. nanba...unnakula oru shakespere ah...pinitta po...keep writing

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  20. Nice Story Dear! I am proud of you! Awating for next story....

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  21. Brthr kalakiteenga ponga....... story weightu..ore feelin ga kelapudhu pa...print out eduthuten... subject padikareno illayo inime unga storya adakadi padipen...innu indha maadhiri gujaltiya adhavadhu feelin ga neraya stories eludhunga.....story ya kodambakam pakkam solliraadhengo apdiye padama edupaanunge padupaavi pasanga....ungalaale ippo enakulle super feelin ga iruku...idhe feelin le room ku poren... tata bye bye...ipadikku ungal arumai thambi vicky vicky vicky................

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  22. Machi,
    Perumaya irukku da... I am really proud of you! pinni irukka... intha nan kathai elutha bayangaramana inspiration ah irukkap poguthu!!!

    But itha tamillaye eluthi irunthanne padikka innum sulabama irukkumm.. innuum bayangara feel irukkum....

    Keep going!!!

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  23. என்னுயிர்லே ஒருத்தி .. கண்டபடி எனை துரத்தி... :)

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  24. yebba...
    first meetingle antha nandha, meera tholula kaiya potutan paaren.. So Nandha kulla etho olenjitu irukku...

    Over Love story pa.Seekram climax ku vanga Mr.Manesh. Romba thrillinga irukku.

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  25. hi da i am prince ,how r u machi ur looking good ..............

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  26. Superb story ma.... Very gud... Romba rasichu padichean romba santhosama irunthuchu congrats!!!!

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