SATYAM THEATRE VAASAL ( 7 PM)……
“Adhu nammala pottu thaakanum, thala keela pottu thiruppanum…” machi enna dialog da adhu, anubavichi ezudhirukan ya, rasigan da avan, pugazthutae ponan vtv padatha parthutu guru …
(Guru – ennoda roommate, office mate , ellarthukum mela en close friend)
Apadiyae avanoda favorite rx100 la rendu perum enga thiruvanmiyur mansion ku kelambnom, 20-40-60 nu rx100 ku uriya special soundoda madras traffic la parakka arambichom….
Evening 7 30 mani irukum, appo kuda madras veyilin thaakam korayala, kasa kasa nu irundhuchu, nooravudhu vaati sollitan guru, indha madras la satyam theatrum, thiruvanmiyur beachum ellana na eppavo oodi poirupaen da machi….
(Guru mind voice – unnayum serthu da nanba)
Guru pesa pesavae “raja raja sozan naan…” adhu en mobile tone….. jerry calling….. avan ennoda pazaya college friend… eppadi da iruku padam nu visarika aarambichan….. machi worth watchin .. na vandiyila irukaen …. Masion ku poitu kupidraen nu vachitaen. Appo dhan nyabagam vandhuchu, climax parthitrundhapo oru unknown number la irundhu call vandhadhu, padam paakra aarvathula adha attend pannala.. sari traffic la edhuku, mansion poi kupidalamnu vittutaen….
Happy home mansion (7 50 pm)….
Nalla vela traffic sumara irundhadhale match start panradhukulla vandhu serthom machi nu sollikitae tv remote ah theadi on pannen tv ya…( ipl finals Chennai vs Mumbai)…. advertisement… aiyo yaaru baating nu theriyalayae nu na polambave, csk batting da nu than sms parthu sandhoshatula koochlitan guru… eppavum pola viruvirupa aarambichadhu match, finals aanadhala extra excitement, csk adicha ovvuru boundry kum orae kai thattal aaravaram….
5 vudhu overla 2 wkt vizavae … balatha kaithattal, visil sattham, aaravaram… indha vaati adhu naanga illa , pakkathu roomla irukra north kara pasanga .. obvious ah Mumbai Indians supporters…. Machi namma thotthuta ivanunga pechu thanga mudiyadhe da, idhukaga vachu csk win pannanum da nu pada padappodu guru sonnan…
Amudham mess (9 45)…
Ennada machi 167 dhan da adichirukom, chase panniruvanunglo, sachin oruthane podhumae nu polambikitae nadandhom amudham mess ku…..
Thala rendu perukum dhosai omlet seekirama nu sollikitae en mobile ah kaila eduthaen….
Andha missed call nyabagam vara, udanae call pannaen andha number ku…UN SIRIPINIL RING TONE…. ethir munayil oru girl voice…..eppadi en mind ku ettichi nu theriyala,
hello meera???.....nu mounam aanaen……
hey nandha…. Eppadi da kandu pidicha, unna kalaikallamnu nenachen, ippadi panitiae da paavi nu chellama kova patta meera….
Eppadi irukae meera?? Evvlo naal aachu?? Mobil vangitia?? Engae irukae?? Enna panre?? Nu padapadapu kalandha excitement oda kaettu mudikradhu munnadiyae…. Aiyo en warden kupidranga, na chennai la dhan irukaen , iruka poraen, will call u later nu sollitu vachita…..
Meera…. Nenachalae oru aanandham…..Yaar indha meera… oru kutti flash back
Flash – 1 year back
College culturalz (11 30 am)…..
Appo na final year , idhuvaraikum college culturalz yedhuvumae na attend pannadhu illa….adhula ellam interest illanu sollradhu vida na oru cricket piriyanu sollalam, sumara aadradhala first year layae college team la serthukitanga… class ah thavira na irundha mukkiyamana moonu idamna… ground, physical dept, tv hall(adhum match paaka)….so college la always namma first luv cricket dhan…
Indha final year la yavadhu culturalz ah parthidanumnu plan panni seekiramae practice ah mudichitu team oda college ku, koothum kaeliyuma oru attendance pottom… appadiyae ella thayum oru round adichitu kadaicia irundha astronomy club kula poondhom…. Ponadhuku mukkiya kaaranam andha club la neraya galz… machi, ippadi oru club, ivvlo figures nu therinjirundha yeppovo join pannirupaenae nu yaekka pattan sunil…, maama ellame fashion technology figures da nu than panguku peru moochu vittan mani…,
Appadiyae ellathyaum sight adichitu, namakku edhuvum theralaye ngra yaekkathula nadaya katta aarambichom,
hi.. please unga views a ezuthitu ponga nu oru visiters note ah en munnadi neetina oruthi…
ava dhan meera…..
Avala partha vudane first kannula patta naalu vishyam…
Curly hair , konjam mai jashthiiya potta avaloda karu karu vizigal, peria round ear rings, long black skirt…
( adhuku appuram na ponnungla rendavadhu vaati thirumi pakradhuku bench mark idhellam dhan)
Ponnunga kita pesavae rumba koocha patta kaalam adhu, eppadi thairiyam vanduchunu theriyala… unga name appadinu kaettutaen?
Avalum meera final bsc ft nu appadinu endha salananum ellama sonna… thirupi paer ah kaeppanu edirparthen… aana ava kaekala…. Edho pesanum nu vai eduthaen, yaaro kuptangnu kanama poita meera… manase illama edatha gaali pannom….
College kadaisi naatkal….
Exact ah meera va paarthadhu la irundhu moonavudhu naal, “astronomy club invites you to view the solar eclipse today “ nu college entrance layae oru board…. Takkunu manasula oru sandhosham meera pakradhukana vaippu……
Kaaliliyae pona doubt vandidumnu, 12 mani ku appadiyae naanum jerryum ponaom.. edhir paartha madhiriyae meera….
Kandipa ena nyabagam vachirupangra gut feeling la…
hai meera appadi nu aarambichen…..
Aama ava enna nalla nyabagam vachirundha..
Hai sorry cultralz la busy ya irundha dhale unga paer ah kuda kaekama vitutaen….nu sonna…
Am nandha… final aeronautical nu sollimudikala naan……
Oh.. andha cricketer nandha neenga dhana… unga peara neraya vaati parthirukaen college weekly magazine la.. ippo dhan ungala pakaraen nu sonnalo illayo….
(thanks to the game – vilayduradhula ippadi oru matter ah)…
Sumara aaduvenunga nu asadu valinjaen……
Yerkanave plan panni vachirundha madhiri ava kaila vacha note book ah takkunu eduthu, oru autograph um en mobil numberayaum ezuthittu… naalaiku na peria player aana nenga enna theda venaamla nu oru bitta potta saakula numberyaum kuduthutaen……
Enkita mobile ellaye …. Meera
Landline irundhu kuda kupiudalame…. Nu asatu siripodu irukum podhu oru professer entry kuduka …
“the stars in the sky nu ..,edho explain panna aarambicha….
(EN MIND VOICE - evvlo azaga samalikranga ponnunga… sky la mattuma stars ….meeraaaa… yaekka pattaen…… )
ADUTHA ORU VAARAM…..
Avala parthathadhuku appuram adhutha oru vaarathuku mobile la yendha oru call ella msg vandhalum, adhu meera va irukanum ngra thought la edupaen, yeamatram dhan micham……
Adhuku appuram rendu vaati avala college la parthirupaen, adhuvum dhoorma, oru smile oda pova…
rendu maasam oodi poiduchu…. Naanum project adhu idhu nu busy aayutaen…..
Innum college mudiaya oru vaaram irukum, oru land line number la irundhu call…
Yes.. Meera vae dhan…..
hai nanada….
Meera..…eppadi irukkae….
Fine nandha… idhu en frnd number.. na rumba neram pesa mudiyadhu…. naalaiku en examz mudiyudhu, adhoda college um over…. Unna paakanum nu thonuchu… if u wish… paklama nanda?....
Enakum ne kupida maatiyanu thoni kitae irundhuchu meera…Ya sure… place?
Glacier park… evening 5 pm ok va?
Ya done….
Sari meet u tomorrow… bye….
Ok bye
(EN MINDVOICE – INDHA BYE MUDIVA ELLA THODAKKAMA……)
Marunaal maalai 4 30 ku ellam na glacier park munnadi aajar…. 5 15 ku vandha meera… sorry late aayudichu na….
(EN MINDVOICE – yendha ponnu dhan sonna nerathuku vandhirukanga)
Na first time ah avala partha podhu potrundha adhe black skirt, ear rings, karu karu mai vizigal, and ofcourse most attractive curly hair…..
Truly charismatic….
Evvlo neram venumnaalum meera vukaga wait pannalamga….
Saria rendu mani neram pesunom .. illa illa ava pesuna na parthikitu irundhaen infact avala rasichi kittirundhaen…..
Enaku mattum appo oru varam kidachirundha time oodadha madhiri apadiyae niruthi vachirupaen…
Enna pesunomnu ninaivula illa… aana en college life nu eppo thirumbi parthalum…. nyabagam varra vishyathula indha rendu mani neramumum kandipaga irukum…..
7 mani irukum … time aachu nandha … na kelambanum… anyway nice meeting you.. na ipo happy ya poren…. Life la namma ini meet panuvomanu theriyala….. but… yedho solla vandha …. Mounam…. Sollave illa…….
Ena cross panni konja dhooram poita ava….
Meeraaaaa nu kuptaen……
thirumbi partha…aval mai poosia kangal oru yaekathudan…....
indha moonjiya nalla oru vaati parthuko… un kannula photo pudichi mansula vachiko… appuram paakalayae nu life fulla feel panna porae……
melliya punnagaiyudan vidai petral……
naanum peru moochudan…….migundha magichi oodum…
INTERVAL:-)
TO BE CONTD.......
Nice story... nice start.. Keep going.. Expecting more from u...
ReplyDeleteNice naration, dialogues...
Nice machi
ReplyDeleteOrae Kalakkalz SwtHeart... :)
ReplyDeleteAnna, Is it real story?? remba anubavichu eluthuna madiri irukku.. Can feel the love in your writing na..
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the next part..
machi.. nice narration.. eagerly awaiting d subsequent parts..
ReplyDeletei can understand that Nandha was you, who's that Meera? i know a few Meera's frm our college.. which one among 'em?
itha padikka padikka enakku eno vayiru pathikittu eriyuthu.. yen-na ithu karpanaya irukka vaippe illa-nu thonuthu.. enna thaan nanbana irundhaalum, oru ponnu vishayathula varra poraamaya control panna mudiyala..
konjam real konjam reel konjam dream konjam kettadhu paarthadhu ellam experience dhan machi:-)...
ReplyDeleteReally nice.......
ReplyDeletehi anna;-)its really a gud one...awesome narration...i din know yo had such a talent in yo..i can guess tat nandha was yo but eagerly waitin to know abt meera n d remainin part of d story....ma best wishes;-)
ReplyDeleteMacha gr8 da.... Expecting to see in big screen... next part update panna udanae sollu da
ReplyDeletehey super da...kalakureenga mr.senior.. aana edho idikuthey....meera ? ft? hmmmm kandupidipen da :-) someone from my class i guess ..anyways good job...keep going...my best wishes :-)
ReplyDeleteDey super da..... Go on good one anyways ennoda perayum konjam mindla vai....
ReplyDeletesuch a grt story da.really interesting.i'm very eager to see the next part.innum solla ponaa unaku oru grt future iruku da.grt job.
ReplyDeleteClassic da :)
ReplyDeletehmmm,,,,,, its really a nice story,,,,,ya,,,i think u love her so much ,,,, tats y u hve written all tis,,, can u do a favour i want 2 see meera can u post her photo in ur profile,,,,,, and complete the remaining story ,,,plzzzzzzzz... expecting u 2 do so,,
ReplyDeleteSuper boss. Semma Wordings. Kalakiteenga
ReplyDeletegood one:) keep writing:)
ReplyDeleteScene machi..nice thinkin..micha kadhayayum release pannu machi..
ReplyDeletevery nice story..n i loved it!
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